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Fierce Wings

on Sun Aug 19, 2018 6:32 pm
Name: Fierce Wings
Category: Mutation
Range: Long
Description: This quirk, first and foremost, manifests as wings on the user's back. Hover, this quirk is not simply the ability to fly. This quirk allows the user to manipulate the feathers from his wings with their mind. The user can detach their feathers to perform individual tasks and reattach them afterwards. This Quirk also allows the user to fly and their feathers can each individually sense people and objects through sound and vibrations produced by them. The feathers can be both stiff and flexible. When they are stiff the feather can also be sharp on the edges. There are varying lengths of these feathers as well.
Drawbacks: The more feathers the user detach from their body, the worse their flying capacity becomes, limiting their mobility if they happens to be in mid-air based on the following criteria. At half of the user's Limit Pool, the user's Speed stat while flying is reduced by -1 tier. At one quarter of their Limit Pool, it is reduced by an additional tier.

Limit-Break: -5 Limit: The user can no longer fly at all and cannot use any techniques that relate to their wings and require maintenance

-10 Limit: The user's stamina drops by -2 tiers as their wings appear to be falling apart and can barely hold themselves together.

-20 Limit: The user's wings are no longer present, leaving them unable to perform any techniques. Additionally, the user's stamina is reduced by an additional tier.

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Last edited by Naosuke on Sun Sep 23, 2018 6:34 pm; edited 1 time in total
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Re: Fierce Wings

on Sat Sep 15, 2018 10:03 am
"The feathers alone are strong enough to move a person." -> Give me more detail on this so I know what I'm looking at. Is one feather literally shoving people around or is it a certain level of strength, etc...

"The more feathers the user detach from their body, the worse their flying capacity becomes, limiting their mobility if they happens to be in mid-air." -> How many feathers give what consequence? Are we saying if they remove half their feathers they can't fly anymore or is this just referring to the speed reductions that follow?

-Limit breaks cause unconsciousness at -10 LP now, make the adjustments to match this otherwise it looks fine!
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Re: Fierce Wings

on Sun Sep 23, 2018 6:34 pm
Edits made! Hope that's better
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Re: Fierce Wings

on Sun Sep 23, 2018 9:07 pm
Naosuke wrote:Name: Fierce Wings
Category: Mutation
Range: Long
Description: This quirk, first and foremost, manifests as wings on the user's back. Hover, this quirk is not simply the ability to fly. This quirk allows the user to manipulate the feathers from his wings with their mind. The user can detach their feathers to perform individual tasks and reattach them afterwards. This Quirk also allows the user to fly and their feathers can each individually sense people and objects through sound and vibrations produced by them. The feathers can be both stiff and flexible. When they are stiff the feather can also be sharp on the edges. There are varying lengths of these feathers as well.
Drawbacks: The more feathers the user detach from their body, the worse their flying capacity becomes, limiting their mobility if they happens to be in mid-air based on the following criteria. At half of the user's Limit Pool, the user's Speed stat while flying is reduced by -1 tier. At one quarter of their Limit Pool, it is reduced by an additional tier.

Limit-Break: -5 Limit: The user can no longer fly at all and cannot use any techniques that relate to their wings and require maintenance

-10 Limit: The user's stamina drops by -2 tiers as their wings appear to be falling apart and can barely hold themselves together.

-20 Limit: The user's wings are no longer present, leaving them unable to perform any techniques. Additionally, the user's stamina is reduced by an additional tier.

Users: (This for staff and you can largely ignore this)

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